Title: "Part XII: In the Dark" (3754 words)
Summary: Ah, the best made plans... everybody faces a big detour in their plans and must find another way to work through the situation.
Warnings: Mild violence and language.
Pairing: The ever-present implied Luis/Rachel.
Author's Note: Took me long enough, right? It also took me twelve parts to realize that I really suck at and loathe writing the summary for each part. LOL. Never read the summary; I have no idea what I'm saying.
This part was well over 4000 words in the first draft, but let's face it. That is waaaay too long. It was also horribly balanced between the flashback in the beginning and then Paris time in the end, so I took out as much of the extraneous crap that I could. I'm hoping that it still makes sense. If something doesn't flow well, let me know so I can fix it. Get ready for a flashback only part next! I have been planning that part and picturing it in my head ever since I began plotting this fic, so I'm hoping that it won't take nearly as long as this one did.
Also, yes, I am backdating this entry for November 18th so that this MAMMOTH PART was completed and posted on Rachel's birthday. The woman is 31 today, she deserves a gift! As always, ENJOY.
...I have no idea how to make a fucking paragraph indent any more. So, sorry, it's confusing, but it's 4 in the damn morning and I hate LJ right now.
( Part XII: In the Dark )